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# QA — 02-natiscart-FINAL (stage: final)

0 fatal, 7 major, 1 minor, 0 cosmetic (cosmetic = a viewer cannot see it at full speed)

| At | Kind | Severity | Notice | What |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0s | text | major | 2 | On-screen caption text is placed directly overlapping the actress's face, violating placement rules. |
| 1s | text | major | 3 | The top caption "they don't want you to know this 😭" remains permanently burned on screen for the *entire rest of the video*, not only while that line is spoken. |
| 8s | continuity | major | 2 | A floating mismatched inset clip of a stranger's armpit/arm appears on the left frame edge; this is leftover from the original donor video and does not belong in this remake. |
| 10.7s | speech | major | ? | brand said as "do" instead of "Doe" |
| 12s | wrong-product | major | 2 | The brand logo printed on the held deodorant bottle is distorted and incorrect; it does not match the clean "doe" logo on the reference product. |
| 19s | sell | major | 2 | During the application demonstration, the deodorant stick never actually touches the armpit skin, it is held floating just above the skin, so the demonstration is not properly performed. |
| 29s | wrong-product | major | 3 | All text printed on the deodorant bottle is fully reversed (mirrored backwards) while held close to camera. The backwards text is clearly legible. |
| 52s | hands | minor | 1 | While removing the bottle cap, the hand holding the cap has distorted, merged fingers with incorrect anatomy. |

## What the video says

Let me know why it took the girls 30 freaking years to figure out how to lighten dark armpits without paying $2,000 for a procedure.  There you go. I was scrubbing at my armpits to try and get rid of that stain. That's not going to do anything.  If you're using harsh foliant daily, you're not going to fade your dark armpits.  So the fact that they finally stuck kojic acid and turmeric in a detodorant by the same celebrity brand that's always sold out on here.  So no wonder it sold out three days after long.  After seeing the reviews of how good it lightened, I was expecting it to smell like shit.  But if you are a vanilla girl, this really smells like the most luxurious Caribbean, like Bora Bora rich bitch.  Because of that, though, literally all of TikTok decided to sell this out.  They just restocked them.  when you get two. So they're literally flying off the freaking shelves like crazy. Look how  freaking cute it is. So running the promo, this, this is your sign to run.

## The reviewer, in full

```
[
    {"t": 0, "kind": "text", "notice": 2, "severity": "major", "what": "On-screen caption text is placed directly overlapping the actress's face, violating placement rules."},
    {"t": 1, "kind": "text", "notice": 3, "severity": "major", "what": "The top caption \"they don't want you to know this 😭\" remains permanently burned on screen for the *entire rest of the video*, not only while that line is spoken."},
    {"t": 8, "kind": "continuity", "notice": 2, "severity": "major", "what": "A floating mismatched inset clip of a stranger's armpit/arm appears on the left frame edge; this is leftover from the original donor video and does not belong in this remake."},
    {"t": 12, "kind": "wrong-product", "notice": 2, "severity": "major", "what": "The brand logo printed on the held deodorant bottle is distorted and incorrect; it does not match the clean \"doe\" logo on the reference product."},
    {"t": 19, "kind": "sell", "notice": 2, "severity": "major", "what": "During the application demonstration, the deodorant stick never actually touches the armpit skin, it is held floating just above the skin, so the demonstration is not properly performed."},
    {"t": 29, "kind": "wrong-product", "notice": 3, "severity": "major", "what": "All text printed on the deodorant bottle is fully reversed (mirrored backwards) while held close to camera. The backwards text is clearly legible."},
    {"t": 52, "kind": "hands", "notice": 1, "severity": "minor", "what": "While removing the bottle cap, the hand holding the cap has distorted, merged fingers with incorrect anatomy."}
]
```